There I met him, John Smith, needless to say I fell in love with him. A poem i wrote in class. The grey began to fade, As the colours filled the sky, The chill began to warm, As the sun began to rise. A lost girl found direction, As the eastern orb rose high, The dark sky turned to blue, Like the colour of his eyes. Dark turned to light, Grey turned to blue, Lost became found, That's when I met you.
Heheh how sweet XD, ya know I like writing love poems too, later i shall share some that I wrote too^^ O good luk with ur relationship =D
that is so beautiful, I've got poems like that, I'll post them some time. But seriously, that is so sweet. Has he seen this?
Yeah, curious actually, how is it creepy? chiehc87 and I are both curious. I think it's beautiful, to have feelings like that inspire you to put into words. You do realise song lyrics and famous poems all have the same sort of approach. Are you saying song artists and poets are creepy too? I'm sure you listen to music and know the lyrics to some songs too.
lol the poem itself is nice, but if a girl came up to me and said 'here i wrote this poem about you' i would kinda get freaked out... lol this is the kind of thing u show someone on a third or fourth date... or you know, post it on PA for all to see
Yeah probably, but still, it's nice to write things like that though. She didn't exactly say she will show him it straight away. Still, you got anymore poems? This is so sweet! lol
I think is kind of cute for a girl to write a poem for the guy but it would be creepy if she showed it to him when he hardly knows her...
Nice one. Its a gift to be able to write and be able to express yourself. Ignore the negative comments, only guys that don't know how to manage good relationships will struggle with this one.
