LOL, and I was saying the first Polly looked too old to be a college student! Let's see how BRain is going to solve this. -devil
I think she looks OK! As long as she fits the description rite? 'supposedly' blue eyes, bad hair, slightly overweight, freckles
@Tax: Yeah, did u cheat by quoting me? @Hiake: She's not to be a likeable character neway. Lol what do you think, Tax? Who do u vouch for?
What oh no, I swear I just went thinking which famous young looking celeb with blond hair had passed away already. If it wasn't James Dean (the first name that came into my mind) it must have been River Phoenix and I went googling for his pics. Thinking of it, I feel stupid as I could have cheated by using the quote as I really wanted to know who that guy was and I know I couldn't sleep if I didn't know the answer! >.< And I vote for this younger version of Polly as the first one looked way too old! (in her 30's like!) edit: anyway, now I know who this 'Carl' is, I'm going to catch some sleep for the form.
it was a nice story lol but the genre isnt really my style, if thats alright with you one minor thing i sort of found weird is that in your second or third paragraph, its basically quote after quote.... but otherwise, nice story
^you mean the 'quotation marks'? I don't think it's too weird using the two story telling styles. Thanks! -bigclap (Well, Cuomo is a nerd after all, but he can look very cute if the photo is taken from the right angle)
What quote marks are u talking about? -what? Is it the 'speech'? @Tax: So r u going to imagine urself as Polly now? lol
@BRain: no...<_< It's just a bit easier to imagine these personages if the faces also 'fits' otherwise some people -like me- can't believe the way the personages are behaving. -sweat