You can make it as long or short you want to but if you're really out of good ideas, make sure it will be a gory, bloody festive with guts flying everywhere! -lol OK, I'm really gone now.
ok. i'm glad I came back for chp6. haha ... hhmm .. getting good; girl making a move on guy, sex, blood ...
^There won't be much sex from now on; it'll be more on gore and horror now... So step back ab289, before u wet ur pants lol...
So far, pretty good. Now get movin on chapt 8 -bigsmile , let's see what happens to poor little polly -whistle
ok lets see that girl get cut up.lol no but realy polly might get saved i'm thinking.lol i can see Kaelyn and Carl run in to save her and polly get blamed for cuting her arm up.lol becuase she wanted to get back at Janie for killing her dog,even tho she killed it but who know's.lol lets see what baby got for us next
ok so i was close ok next guess. well Janie evil self healed the cut's on her arm i think. now polly will look like a damn fool.lol and she might even think she's losing her mind too. i wonder if polly has a nice cute paded room booked down at the crazy house but then again that might be to nice for her so her blood must feed the beast! let's see her heart riped out,and ate by a sweet cute lil demon pet but my guess is she'll die soon and eveybody will think she killed herself. becuase she lost her mind becuase she felt so bad for killing her own pet. and Janie will be the only one to know what happen again.lol
much sex??!?!?! sweet.. but since i aint into gore and that shit, ill read it up to the sex part write more of it, and i shall read more -evil
well i beleve Kaelyn's father raped her when she was a kid. if it was anything else i don't think her mom would have such a hard time telling her about it. plus the wine is tastless to her,her eye's are so messed up brobly from crying so damn much. we can tell she still love's Frank,and want's to think of him. but she feel's bad becuase his sick ass did this to her lil girl that she also love's. you can tell with stuff like: her husband… no, her ex-husband The incident that she wished she would never knew about. Who was she kidding As if her heart was being stabbed you can see she still care's about him,but can't care for him becuase it's wrong. and is hurt inside so bad becuase she tell her lil girl the turth. but it may hurt her more to know what happen. at least that's my guess this time,maybe wrong.lol let's wait and see
Sorry I haven't been around to follow your story But now I am up to date ^+++^ The incident of Chapter 8 would have been a bigger impact if it was more drawn out and elaborated... Though in all the chapters' length is short n' sweet = good -^_^ Keep up!
Nah, if the Dad had touched his daughter the mother would have never allowed him to keep contact with his daughter. But he may have been cheating on her with another man...
Hey, Tax Lol, cheating on her with another MAN? Naughty of you to think of that.... but we'll see! Shall I update now... ? -lol Where were you?
Haha, I don't like to think in the most obvious way You already have chapter 10? Went to Cologne again yesterday, had a great shopping day and enjoyed the food over there. (asparagus season!) -chef
^Aww, sounds like much fun! Well, I am glad for you -lol Yup, in fact, I am near the end... PA being down the past couple of days left me with not much choice but to continue on it... lol
As requested, Chapter 10... -devil Not much of an excitement there though I am feeling rather generous, might update another chapter later, if there's more 'requests' lol.
Hmmmm, interesting chapter... I don't quite feel for Carl somehow (I know I SHOULD, but I just don't @_@b), but Janie's creepiness is like so out-of-place it's delicious Keep up my twin
