Chapter 14 intrigues me; what is Janie's exact relationship to Kaelyn and her mom? Is this Janie talking or the demon inside her? Good, I didn't like her anyway and there's still a bit to few gore to my taste hehe -devil
That's what came across my mind too, although...wasn't there an easier way to revenge on Frank? (possess Kaelyn or his ex-wife?)
Nah, in fact I don't even think that the "demon (or whatever go around possesses people)" want to revenge on Frank...
It's her impression; she sounds like a weak woman and at first it looks like she's angry with her ex because of something small. But that sticks to her image now, from my point of view. I don't feel any sympathy for her.
What does the 'demon' wants do you think? A horrible death by torture a la Saw 1, 2 or 3. -evil Just kiddin'! Jut don't want her survive and regret whatever she has or hasn't done/said.
No, at first I thought she was angry over him for something small, before we knew what Frank did to his sister. And I can't get rid off that image of her now despite we now know why she's so upset.
^Aww, but that wouldn't be fair to her now would it! You should change your perception of her... after what is revealed... LOL
Neh, I think a story can stand up above others if it takes a deviant turn; no mercy with the good guys, sad ending etc. -rolleyes
i don't think Samantha will get killed.lol i been enjoying this story alot,i'll miss it when its over:( i think that the dad will show up and get killed but save his wife.lol don't ask me why i just do Kaelyn and carl will show up and the fight is on.lol keep up the great job baby i'll read it and any other storys you post your a great writer,i just wish others would post:( and let you know how good you are be cool
You can start another story when BR finished with this one (just so she get a break from writing...) then when you finish YOUR story BR should have enough stock to start a new story... Great way to revive this Fanfix section
^Come on. You have proven to have quite an imagination. And you have predicted well enuff. You can take over me...!
nope i can predict good but i don't have the brains to put it all togather even if i made a story.lol your the writer i'll be your muse if you want.-tongue2 but i'm not got what it takes to write.lol
Well, hiake's going to take after, after mine finished... She's just itching to get hers started... -devil
