Oh you mean this sentence "Kaelyn had never been able to attach herself to anyone, except for Carl, due to her past."? I was referring to her not being able to be close to anyone because of her family past. You know, her dad and mom separated and she living with her mom, and her mom kept telling her how bad her Dad was... So living in a broken family, made her not being able to get close to anyone and open up her heart. hehehe Sorry for the confusion if you guys are expecting a DARKER past
Yeah well, it was totally possible...maybe there was a period in which she was torturing and killing small animals because she lived in a broken family and her Mom not giving the right attention she needed. -rolleyes
yep she have to at least end up in a nut house.lol i'd like to see her die tho-innocent2 but i'm sure mr creed will die now:( it just don't look good for him but hay theys always hope.lol keep up the great work baby!!!!
Nothing against Polly, but I personally think there must be more blood gushing around if you want to make a proper horror/gore story!
-devil you know how it is.lol -dead-dead-dead-dead-dead-dead-dead-dead-dead-dead-dead-dead-dead-dead-dead-dead-dead -bigclap polly needs to die that meny times-tongue2
Almost near the end, hopefully we'll hear more about Polly after she left the house screaming and hopefully Mr. creed doesn't die otherwise Kaelyn would have no family left :( . Did the devil choose to posses Jaine because of her bloodline ?
Hehe yep! That's a thought to ponder... because Janie is bornt out of 'sinful' means... You know, incest and rape...
Yep yep.. she looked into Janie's eyes... and the world began to spin? Anyway, I was trying to portray the real Janie which Kaelyn saw... Janie was emaciated, haggard, etc. due to being possessed by the 'being' in her. And the conversation Kaelyn had with Janie was with the real Janie.
Interesting twist... So now I am really curious about the proposition. Did the being wanted K's soul? Keep it coming -hug Can't wait for the next one!!!
well mr creed might make a come back baby didn't say he was dead so will see who kill her i'm thinking mr creed will kill her because he made it all happen it'd only be right for him to end it but keep up the great work baby!!!
Chapter 30... The truth is dawning... Are you peeps excited?! The last chapter!!! The Finale!!! Is going to be here ... tomorrow or to keep the suspense a 'lil longer, the day after
This chapter is intense. Mr. Creed did took things into his own hand. Aalmost near the end and still haven't heard of the other friend. I'm gonna picture a conclusion for myself for now since you're gonna make us wait for a while -lol.
I am surprised that Janie would be SO preoccupied by K to be jumped upon by Mr. Creed. Demons should have better foresight than that... But OMG, last chapter!!!!
It doesn't hurt to keep the suspense going for a lil' longer Meanwhile, I have added the clips from which these scenes inspired my story... The Exorcist (possession), Hannibal (killing of Samantha), The Shining (possession -"Take your medicine!") and Carrie (killing of Mr. Creed -almost). Please be patient for a lil longer and the truth will finally be revealed. -evil
