Ok....so i used to write poems when i was a bit younger (16ish) I stopped for a long time...but lately i feel like writing again... So i decided to start my own poem thread... For the record....The stuff I write are not I REPEAT... not based on my own love life !!! && there might be some spellin mistakes here and there....sorry....my english isnt perfect...hehe Anyway, here are the first 2.... These are 2 verses....i used one of them in that song of my thread...other one still needs to be recorded when im in the mood for it.... Leavin Im leaving tonight don’t wanna be in this world of lies At first I just denied but suddenly I just realized Gave you my heart but you took it for granted I tell you now that I know u pretended Don’t wanna play these games with you Why don’t you look for another fool? So many nights you had me twisted all I did was cry I’m ready to find a guy who’s really gonna love me right Enough of things that you said and done It’s pretty clear boy you’re not the one I packed my bags and I’m out the door Don’t want to deal with your flaws no more I was bored just now...and wrote this Break up Ill just walk away and say that I don’t love you anymore Like I can give up all the things I love and adore That it’s not hard for me to leave everything behind Act as if I can delete our memories out of my mind I won’t turn around and show you that im falling apart I'll hide my tears, wont show, that I cried it only makes things hard Wont go and cause a scene or make things complicated Try my best to look strong and not to look jaded It’s over between you and I, we are now called history Just want you to know I’ll never forget what u meant to me Now go ahead, move on and go find somebody new I wont give u a hard time, I pretend I'll do the same too Oct 21.07 Felt like writing something this morning while i was laying in bed.... hmmm....its supposed to be a song lol...its not finished yet... but for now~ The Reason I sometimes wonder… how my life would be without you But I get so anxious, I simply wouldn’t have a clue My world would fall apart… you’d leave me with a broken heart My days ‘d be cold and blue There’s simply no living without you You’re my everything, when I have you I don’t need more The reason why I’m living & you’re the one that I would die for In a life without you tell me what would I do? The only reason why I exist is you I ask myself why, why it had to be you Like a fairytale angel you made all my dreams come true You’ve taught me how to love And now I just can’t get enough Gottta have you here with me Without you I can’t be You’re my everything, when I have you I don’t need more The reason why I’m living & you’re the one that I would die for In a life without you tell me what would I do? The only reason why I exist is you I got so caught up sometimes I feel like it’s a curse But then I realize that theres something that is worse Cuz if I never came to me I never knew how it would be To love someone with all my heart and soul & that’s when I feel blessed and know that everything I wished for... I have it all You’re my everything, when I have you I don’t need more The reason why I’m living & you’re the one that I would die for In a life without you tell me what would I do? The only reason why I exist is you -------------------------- 24.-11-08 Ok all i could come up with for now is this My weakness is to blame I have fought and I have tried Conclusions remain the same It was too much for me to abide All that’s left are tears I can’t tame Feelings I’m unwilling to confide
ye, I noticed it too, its probably because of the assonance in it as for the poem, are you sure its not based on your own life?? jk jk THe poems sound sad but yet very nice
Lol....the first one was written....i think 2 weeks ago....and the other one just a few hours ago.... im bored so.....hehehe....
haha.. did the free styling sessions gave you the impulse to start this thread? but now i understand why you can do rhymes.. cos you do write poems. can't comment cos i know nuts abt poems.. haha btw.. ur new avvy rocks.. where you found it? whats assonance?
Hahahaa...no lar....i wrote poems waaaay before that....freestylin is something i started (tryin) to do the last few days hehe hmmm....yeah i <3 my new avy too.....i saw it on a website and i loved it...so errr....i just "took" it -emb-emb-emb-emb i know...shame on me!
lol hmmm yeah! this is me flexing my poetic muscle: =O I can still recall those days, As I grew up in that town. Those fond memories of you, Before I returned down. Few Photos remain, Of the things we used to do, I can't live anymore, If living is without you. And time goes by so slowly, 'Till the day we meet again. But my fear of losing you, Makes my goals begin to wane. Ah the intricacy of love, As I write this lost for words. I am sitting in Hyde Park, With shit dropping from birds. oh i liked ur poems btw!!! >____>
Errr...yeah why dont u just post ur poem in ANGIESpoem thread -sweat JK....haha Anyway, Nice poemmm....hahaha....hyde park eh? sydney !!!
^ lol.. someone is drawing clear boundaries in her thread ah... i so like ur avvy im going to draw it.. o.. and if its a graphic design website, can share? hmm.. but its probably not.. maybe the website u took from.. also stole it from somewhere.. haha.. let me guess.. you found that at someone's blog? edit.. nono.. a tattoo website?
Hahahaha..heyhey...i was just kiddin ar...!! Yeah...its flashy and girly....<3.....and not too sweet It wasnt from a graphic design website....yes it was from someones website.... Anyway, show me ur drawing when ur finished oki?!
i wanna sleep tooo...cant fall asleep...tried for over an hour..... the wind is soooo noisy...i think my windows are gonna break soon =/
it sounded very smart huh? just joking... we are just doing poems at school right now, in fact I hate poems lol...anyways an assonance is like where the vowel is rhyming somewhere in the sentence: Im leaving tonight don’t wanna be in this world of lies At first I just denied but suddenly I just realized
