A short and sad poem I just thought up..

I call this piece, "One mans journey.." A tragic tale of a man and his shoes..


Once there was a man who hated his shoes,
so they parted ways and he bid fairwell to his uncomfortable blues,
he despised sandels, boots, and even tried on some jimmy chews,
as time went by he couldn't remember why he needed those rotten shoes,
He pondered and pondered, but didn't have a clue..
till the day came when he stepped on a big pile of poo.. =''[

My contribution to the fan fix forum, so sad, yes I know. Lol

 

then he realized he was just a foool
without his shoe he was nobody and that wasn't cool
he bought a jordan or maybe two
then realized that he loves his shoe
now he don't know wat he wanan do
so he went to go poo poo

 

As he glanced down he saw the resemblance of the poo and his tiny shoe,
he quickly realized that his jordans were no longer cool,
but a sign that he was just an unsecure tool,
now that the tool was a bit less of a fool,
he asked himself why oh why is society so cruel right before he looked into the mirror and convinced himself that he still ruled..

 

then a ghost came in and said boo
he fell backwards and went coocoo
he woke up and found some glue
and then he pimped out his new shoe
these kicks were so coool
blinging like kdotc cause he so cool
walking like how kdotc do
and thats how he met sue

 

^ hey thats not a bad little poem aside from the kdotc parts... what a cheap way of including yourself in it -lol but gotta admit the poem is cool hee hee

 

oh i'm loving your signature p3ps1c0la! that kid is so cute..looks like my little cousin! -lol great poem by the way. poor guy, he just wanted cool shoes!

 

Then he laced up some Air Forces and went to school..
and Sue didn't have a clue where he had gotten those nice shoes..
White on White with the bottom the color of navy blue..
had a matchin' sweater so he was lookin' real smooth..

and his shoes he did adore...
Vowing to keep the shoes he wore..
the poo bothered him.... nevermore...

 

^ joining in on the fun eh ecko? ahaha

 

lol ain't no fun if ecko can't have none... ahahah..

 

right..right... -rolleyes

 

why don't you join the party sp-lork!?

 

ahaha sorry, but when it comes to poetry, i draw my lines

 

great... draw for us instead... -clapclap

lol yo Pepsi... you need to writing something with that lil kid in your avatar... it's got me rolling... -rofl...

 

draw? oh phooey, more work for me -lol but yeah, i agree with ya ecko, pepsi, you should make another poem about that cute little kid in your signature. haha

 

Lol thx all, I saw this sig and had to have it. I was balln for the longest. K, this isn't a poem really but check it out, took me about 15 minz. =D

Check this out, this kids drives the girls wild,
he's got pimpn azz style,
the ladies know his name cuz he's got status for miles,
he got em call'n, crawl'n, stalk'n, and gawk'n,
mah mans so pimpn he got em stiff walkn,
but playa knows the rules he got their numbers on file,
playa know game u'll never catch him on trial,
mah mans bust a move and got all the girls riled, lookn at their faces ull see nuthin but smiles.
=p

And I liked how you ended that poem Ecko. Nice

 

ayo nuthin' but smiles, but more like LOL..
Dancin' like he in the video with D4L
lil homie got moves you can tell
make all the shorties wanna yell..
stylin his hair with a bucket of gel
a new dance call it "Stylin The Hair"
make everbody wanna stare..
was he listenin' to Chingy's "Right Therre?"