Breaking up is never easy...

Discussion in 'Love and Relationships' started by leehkfan, Jan 27, 2008.

  1. leehkfan

    leehkfan Well-Known Member

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    I recently got dumped, it left me a little bitter. Thought id share a few poems i wrote to express the way i was feeling. I often find writing about it often helps me move on.


    the Bitterness of Rejection

    Nothing can hide the pain i feel inside
    With each rejection another piece of me dies
    Dead behind the eyes, fearing loneliness, afraid of the darkness
    How much can a heart take before it shatters like glass
    Rejection from love, rejection from friendship, rejection for being me
    Bitterness for you not seeing in me the man i wanted to be

    Moment of happiness

    When you left me you said goodbye
    When you left me you made me smile
    A moment of happiness as we parted
    How would I know that a moment we shared would be the last
    A moment with you that will forever be the past

    Feeling the Fool

    A heart that is uncontrolable to choose
    Caring for you without a question
    Hiding from me the secrets of your heart
    Did you ever care for me or am I the fool
    i knew from the beginning but I know you wouldnt admit if i asked
    Feeling the fool for allowing myself to feel like this about you
     
  2. tiffer858

    tiffer858 Well-Known Member

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    wow thats some pretty deep stuff you got there
     
  3. Gambler_Master

    Gambler_Master Active Member

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    yup i agree with tiffer858

    its makes me feel weird..... LMAO
     
  4. wind2000

    wind2000 Self Schemata

    How can she make you smile when she leaves you? -huh
     
  5. bbes

    bbes Incredible

    thats rele gd but like they say the best work always come from ur real emotions. just like the best songs come when ppl have actually experienced what they were feeling.
     
  6. SugaCutie0

    SugaCutie0 Well-Known Member

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    That was sad...-down nice poems though.-^_^
     
  7. leehkfan

    leehkfan Well-Known Member

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    lol, that was about when we last met up. because she told me how she couldnt wait til we met again, i went home happy cos i couldnt wait to see her again, not knowing she was just pretending. i guess they make more sense to me than they would to people reading them, i dunno.-unsure
     
  8. MissCheekS

    MissCheekS Reconnaîssant ❤

    awww...poor u...hope ur okie now....!

    nice poems -flow
     
  9. leehkfan

    leehkfan Well-Known Member

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    yeah ive moved on now, she's not worth getting upset over. Writing down how i feel helped me work things out in my head. It did make me feel more hurt when i found out the reason she dumped me was because she found someone else , but oh well. Im sure someone will snap me up soon enough haha
     
  10. brown_bear

    brown_bear ☆‧° ☆﹒﹒‧ ☆ ﹒﹒‧☆‧° ☆

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    ^ HEY WHO KNOWS..MEBE YA SEE A HOTTIE FROM THE DATING AD'S HERE...-rotfl
     
  11. MissCheekS

    MissCheekS Reconnaîssant ❤

    *ouch* shit happens... and yeah...ur positve...which is good... lots of fish in the sea anyways :p
     
  12. leehkfan

    leehkfan Well-Known Member

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    yeah maybe i could find another chinese hottie who's dad likes my dvd collection lmao
     
  13. MissCheekS

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    wewww....yellowfever-ish arent we :p jk jk -rockon
     
  14. leehkfan

    leehkfan Well-Known Member

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    haha, well it would be good to date someone who actually knew what i was talking about when i mention some of my fav movies, rather than them just look in puzzlement lol but i have no preference, if your hot, i'll date you, chinese or not -tongue2
     
  15. MissCheekS

    MissCheekS Reconnaîssant ❤

    chinese doesnt mean they watch those movies wo :p

    && yeah...like my girl bb suggested....lotsa hotties on tha ads from the PA sponsors puahaha
     
  16. leehkfan

    leehkfan Well-Known Member

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    never said she had to be chinese to like those movies, i never said i was looking to date anyone either -tongue2 how old are you and BB? ;) lmao
     
  17. brown_bear

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    I AM "..85.." YEARS OLD...DUN LAUGH.....OTHERWISE YA DISCRIMINATING...!!......xP


    SO YA GONA CONVERT YA GF INTO LIKING THE MOVIES INSTEAD..-tongue2
     
  18. MissCheekS

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    and i am 12 years old...in mind :D
     
  19. leehkfan

    leehkfan Well-Known Member

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    yeah, converting seems the only way to go lol. i struck gold with you two then, a 85 year old, and a girl with a 12 year olds mind... lucky me :p
     
  20. MissCheekS

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    i reckon my babes BB is the hottest 85y/o ive ever seen though...

    hey lee u remind me of someone called lee!!! PUAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHHAAAHAHHHAHA
    ur from UK so u should remember "steps"

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    puaahhahahahhahahahahhahaaha
    =X sorry