Just something I've written to get some frustration out You've broken my heart so many times, yet I give you the benefit of the doubt. You've put me through misery, yet I tell myself it's okay. You've raised your voice at me, yet I wouldn't do that to you You've shown you don't care, yet I do my best to show you I still do You've been busy to even talk to me, yet I make myself less busy so I can talk to you You've slept easy the past few days, yet I got hit by a car cause I haven't slept at all You've lectured me about telling you my problems, yet you don't tell me anything about yours You've torn me to shreds, yet I want you to put me back together You've broken my heart, yet I still love you.
yeehh very deep stuff... for me it's always "there is no such thing as regret" whatevers happened.. has happened and happened at the time? dont look behind, but look ahead for this is more important. As you will face happier and better things in life!! cheer up dude =) the sun is always behind you.
very nice... i like this line You've slept easy the past few days, yet I got hit by a car cause I haven't slept at all
every other line seems pretty common, that one line is a bit creative along with the comic relief. =)
you know, i actually knew you did get hit. you're poem seems very sincere. but are you okay? i would think you got hit while in your car?
Well hopefully you're okay. I would've thought you got hit while in your car. That was the image I got when I read it. I knew you weren't lying but you seem okay. You need to go keep urself busy and not think so much so you can sleep! I would suggest playing basketball... I always feel like KO after playing. =)