Feel like writing something

Discussion in 'Love and Relationships' started by BakaSenpai, Mar 30, 2008.

  1. BakaSenpai

    BakaSenpai Well-Known Member

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    Just something I've written to get some frustration out


    You've broken my heart so many times, yet I give you the benefit of the doubt.
    You've put me through misery, yet I tell myself it's okay.
    You've raised your voice at me, yet I wouldn't do that to you
    You've shown you don't care, yet I do my best to show you I still do
    You've been busy to even talk to me, yet I make myself less busy so I can talk to you
    You've slept easy the past few days, yet I got hit by a car cause I haven't slept at all
    You've lectured me about telling you my problems, yet you don't tell me anything about yours
    You've torn me to shreds, yet I want you to put me back together
    You've broken my heart, yet I still love you.
     
  2. lala_bel_tempo

    lala_bel_tempo Well-Known Member

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    thats some deep stuff XD
     
  3. tiffystars

    tiffystars Well-Known Member

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    yeehh very deep stuff...

    for me it's always "there is no such thing as regret"
    whatevers happened.. has happened and happened at the time?
    dont look behind, but look ahead for this is more important.
    As you will face happier and better things in life!!

    cheer up dude =) the sun is always behind you.
     
  4. wheezo

    wheezo Well-Known Member

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    very nice... i like this line

    You've slept easy the past few days, yet I got hit by a car cause I haven't slept at all
     
  5. BakaSenpai

    BakaSenpai Well-Known Member

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    lol. why is that? cause it seems like there's a comic relief?
     
  6. wheezo

    wheezo Well-Known Member

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    every other line seems pretty common, that one line is a bit creative along with the comic relief. =)
     
  7. BakaSenpai

    BakaSenpai Well-Known Member

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    irony is...i did get hit by a car. Lol
     
  8. wheezo

    wheezo Well-Known Member

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    you know, i actually knew you did get hit. you're poem seems very sincere.

    but are you okay? i would think you got hit while in your car?
     
  9. BakaSenpai

    BakaSenpai Well-Known Member

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    Oh man, how I wish I can drive. Lol. I got hit crossing the street on a red light. >_>;
     
  10. wheezo

    wheezo Well-Known Member

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    Well hopefully you're okay. I would've thought you got hit while in your car.
    That was the image I got when I read it. I knew you weren't lying but you seem okay.
    You need to go keep urself busy and not think so much so you can sleep!
    I would suggest playing basketball... I always feel like KO after playing. =)