[Horror] THE CHOSEN ONE

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can u record it so i can listen instead of reading? =p

 

No... Then I'd have to do all the sound effects as well...

 

its ok.....its a bedtime story =)

 

>.< At least you can take the effort to read it (i doubt that haha) and tell me what you think.

 

BR, how come its not scary?!? >.<

 

LOL, coz it's just starting?!
Tune in and find out! -rotfl

 

Well, I've read it and I want to know how the story develops now...

 

^Lol, thanks Taxloss.. but like I said I am just halfway.. or maybe quarter of it.. lol.
I'll update part2 tomorrow or day after... Keep you in a lil suspense...

 

ohh .. goodness ... more reading?

 

^So what do you think Lil Devil?

 

I haven't start reading .. it's the weekend. just can't bring myself to read. can you just summarize it?

 

-_-2 No. It's a story and it's only Part 1...

 

ok. just read it. it's pretty good. witchcraft? possessed? or lesbian jealousy?

 

Oh thankies... But to tell you the truth, i haven't decided how it's going to turn out yet.. lol.
Like i said, it was written AGES ago... and was written like just a quarter or half of it.

 

Cant wait for the next parts.

 

^Lol, don't expect much... or u going to be disappointed... Written it ages ago.. kids' stuff.
Aww and congrats Wind on hittin 1k

 

can PA member vote on the storyline? I vote lesbian jealousy!

 

^Lol... but how ya explain that weird voice of Janie's ?

 

it's all in Janie's head! She's a psychotic lesbian herself.