my love story

Discussion in 'Fan Fix' started by jeffereymin, May 20, 2008.

  1. jeffereymin

    jeffereymin Member

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    WIND

    Once in my life in fall season
    i was sitting alone in the corner of a garden
    watching bees flying around from flower to another flower
    birds are chirping as i was whistling
    some flowers dancing along with my song

    Then, a soft Wind blowing with a Good Smell upon me
    i take a deep breath and it takes me away
    the wind keeps blowing around in the corner where i'm lying down
    as the good smell takes me to a fantasy world which i've never been
    in the fantasy land i found a Rose

    A rose like i never saw in the garden
    but it grows in the middle of other roses which bees will fly to
    to let it grow, i'd have to pull other roses away and all grass' & bees
    i give her Food of anything she likes and needs
    i pour her Water, plenty of it

    Will not let her thirst, i pour My Drinking Water
    when Wind blows too hard, i cover her with my cloth
    for i am naked and get cold, she covers me with her leaves
    i am in Love with her, therefore i give all my love to her
    and she gives me her All and All

    Everyday, i give her my Touch for her to remember
    each day it's growing and opening up its Beauty
    for its good smell and beauty, i want it growing in My Own Garden
    as i was moving it into my own garden
    i was affraid some Seed would fall into someone else's garden

    As i was trembling, the wind was blowing harder
    and forcing its thorns sticking on my Fingers which i use to Hold her
    and i was Blind, for it is hurt
    as i can not see
    i started Walking, Stumbling and holding tighter on her, even more

    The more i am affraid it would fall
    the tighter i hold on her as the more she is hurt
    and the harder wind blowing
    the deeper i am hurt
    and i fell hard on a stone unconcious

    When i opened my eyes, in the darkness i can't see a thing
    as i realized, my rose is not in my hand
    i barely feel that wind, i barely taste her smell but it is all in my heart
    then, in the darkness i see a Light and a Whisper
    my Father's Voice is calling me Home

    I follow the Voice as i crawl to the Light
    is my rose still in that fantasy land or she fell along with me
    for i miss her, i search around but i found pieces of its leaves
    hoping the wind still blows with her smell along with my journey to that Light
    when i reached the Light, i will bring It to search for her in the darkness

    If i could catch the wind, if i could just hold her smell
    but wind comes and goes and no one can catch or hold on to it
    for that beautiful rose, i can just hope it remains with its seed
    as i fell, i have crushed it so badly
    as i have bathed in the Light, i hope i could find its seed and sow a new one

    In that light i have changed my cloth
    with my new cloth i will cover my Baby Rose warmly
    with that Light as the Sun Shines above us
    and it gives us Food and Water to grow together
    and gives us one Shadow so we won't go wrong

    I am longing for that wind to blow again
    i miss the good smell of my rose
    and i Love my rose so very much
    my heart has stopped bleeding and i hope it is as well as my rose

    And my heart still remains through time...



    L o v e,


    J e f f e r e y
     
  2. bambee

    bambee Active Member

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    U can compose a song with this lyrics..haha
     
  3. bebe234

    bebe234 Member

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    nice lyrics