please watch my youtube music webseries? :)

Discussion in 'The Lounge' started by macauboy, Dec 14, 2012.

  1. macauboy

    macauboy Active Member

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    Hi everyone,

    Watch my music web series :)
    comment, like, and comment on this thread too please so it gets to reach a larger audience :)

    It's a small project I did with my friends

    Please give me comments and suggestions, which is the main reason for my post here :)

    (click HD for better quality)

    First episode : [video=youtube;Jo2s-YeZwuw]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Jo2s-YeZwuw&hd=1[/video]
     
  2. kevin

    kevin RAWR!

    Interesting project, remind me of WFP videos

    You know when the phone call gets hanged by the receiver (the guy/Chris), it would be better if you use a different method/sound because it seems harsh for the ear (at least for me).

    This is not a suggestion because I am not sure if it is just me or what but when I set it to 1080p, it doesn't seem HD so probably there was an issue in rendering or some kind of video effect you used. In short, I am seeing some block of blurry pixels.
     
  3. macauboy

    macauboy Active Member

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    wow thanks for the comments! :)
    Opps for the harsh sound from the hanging up, but that was because I wanted to make it kind of like a rude shocking phone hang up, so I pumped up the volume lol

    And I'll check the HD part out. Thansk !
     
  4. Hartia

    Hartia Well-Known Member

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    @Kevin i think that was the idea. for the WFP similarity.

    And the first thing I noticed was the hanging up sound too. It doesnt fit the scene, knowing that sound is an actual home phone, rather than a cellphone. Plus you said you wanted to give the harsh intention with the sound but the song doesnt fit that specific sound. Use a softer one, you dont want to deviate from the mood of the video.
     
  5. lala_bel_tempo

    lala_bel_tempo Well-Known Member

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    Hi, as someone who worked in marketing for drama/ movie related clients. Here's what I feel the need to voice out;

    1. Need better camera, this will work out in your interest and the audience.
    2. The person directing the scenes e.g. cameraman/ director needs more improvement in the environment..does this make sense?
    3. Diversify key members (this is for political sakes)
    4. Dress style - this is somewhat important, but I would say minor.
    5. Need more acting practice, but you seem at the amateur level so this is understandable

    Lastly, I watched the whole thing and I did cringe at certain parts - the kissing and I did LOL with a poker cheese face XD. I hope my constructive feedback can help you in the long run. All the best !