Poem - Gone Forever

Discussion in 'Fan Fix' started by person, Apr 3, 2007.

  1. person

    person Well-Known Member

    Yeah, from the title you can probably guess it's a morbid poem... . I wrote this back in grade 9, and edited it not too long ago... for class... haha. Needed to write a poem, too lazy to write one, so I just took this one... .
    Yeah... back then I was a bit of a tomboy, and liked horror movies and what not... so this just popped into my head.

    Gone Forever

    The metal shimmers in the light
    Like the blood on her wrist.
    A thin line of red,
    A torrent of blood begins to flow.
    Slowing creeping down her fingertips,
    Dripping onto the cold, grey pavement.
    One drop at a time…
    One on top of another…
    Ripples swim in the tiny outward puddle
    She winces in pain.
    Large transparent tears roll down her cheeks.
    Mixing into a crimson red.

    I stare in shock.
    Unsure of what to do.
    Wanting to take her pain away,
    Wipe the tears off her face.
    Slowly, I walk toward her,
    Her hands red with blood.
    I reach for her, only to be pushed away,
    Screaming, “Leave me alone!”
    I back away, bloody handprint on my shirt.
    I turn and walk away.
    Leaving her.
    Crying.
    Alone.

    I hear her cries, but continue ahead.
    Tears soak my face.
    After 10 steps, I turn to see,
    Her body on the ground.
    Puddles of blood like red seas around her.
    Her eyes; hollow.
    Her mouth; ajar.
    I’ve lost her.
    Forever.

    Yep... there it is. Hope you liked?
     
  2. kdotc

    kdotc 안녕하세요빅뱅K-Dragon입니다

    hi joane lol
     
  3. xiaojia

    xiaojia Well-Known Member

    ur poem is gloomy...
     
  4. person

    person Well-Known Member

    Thanks for spelling my name wrong... AGAIN! lol. =P

    Haha yeah, the poem is rather dark isn't it?
     
  5. kdotc

    kdotc 안녕하세요빅뱅K-Dragon입니다

    hi JOANNE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    i like ur poem lol
     
  6. xiaojia

    xiaojia Well-Known Member

    lol.. u like anything that comes from a gal..
     
  7. kdotc

    kdotc 안녕하세요빅뱅K-Dragon입니다

    Wat!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  8. person

    person Well-Known Member

    Hey hey... no spamming my thread! lol
    Yeah... spelt my name wrong... AGAIN!!!! lol.
     
  9. yayyitsshortie

    yayyitsshortie Active Member

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    nicee poemm