Jus to let ya noe this is not a real story, its jus one of my latest tragic stories...if ya want to hear more let me noe....or if ya have any suggestions and/or comments it would be greatly appreciated it was a warm suny dai wen dis boy met dis girl ask her out does he dare? palms all sweaty butterflies in his stomach stutter as he spoke here it goes, no stoppin hey girl, u free dis weekend i like 2 take u out 2 movie or sumthin i was waitin 4 u 2 ask wen should i b rdy? wat bout 10 mins afta 5.50 she was the girl of his dreams shes pretty and nice wit a beautiful smile and big brown eyes everythin went well 3 years dey been together time seem 2 fly but it also seems 2 last foreva he gave her everythin even his heart she did the same nothin can tear em apart lately shes been out not a lil not a while from the mornin 2 the evenin he thought she might be cheatin dat wat he thought he asked who she seein its nobody quit trippin annoyed by her answer so sum time he gave her da more dey talked da more he thought wat she tryin to hide y she have 2 hav ly so 1 day he decide to follow her bak side he saw her goin out wit dis guy heartbroken by da news he begins 2 cry didnt noe wat 2 do so he plans to die he didnt tell nobody he was gonna suicide wrote a note 2 her sayin have a good life shes comin home wit a big surprise she was gonna purpose gonna tell him y she had 2 ly it was da weddin planner dall dis time as she walked through da door saw da blood on da floor she dropped to her knees and began to weep saw a note on da desk read out loud wat it said hav a good life wit ur new boyfrend couldnt stand losin u so my life i will end it was all a big mistake wat would she do 2 compensate she took the knife dat ended his life couldnt stand da strife hopin dey would meet in da next life Thank you for spendin time to read this Brandon
geez, thanx for depressing me. on a side note, something like this happened on an episode of csi. except, she was planning a surprise b-day party and the dude wasn't dumb enuf to kill himself. instead he just asked her. moral of the story: y kill urself b4 finding the guy and beating the sh*t out of him first so u can find out the truth?
haha. yeah, i think it's better if you view it as a rap song and read it with that mindset. because, of course, me being a grammar nazi i am i would have told you to spell correctly and use punctuation and create sentences. but as rap, it sounds nice. but the storyline seems a bit cliche?
