[Horror] THE CHOSEN ONE

Discussion in 'Fan Fix' started by BabyRain, May 19, 2007.

  1. BabyRain

    BabyRain Doppelgänger of da E.Twin

    Lol... Not that gory that pic :p
     
    #301 BabyRain, Jun 9, 2007
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  2. mgfcortez

    mgfcortez Well-Known Member

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    so Janie had Samantha for dinner now poor Polly looks like in icecream and cake;)
    bye bye.lol
    keep up the great work baby,i'm love this evil Janie eating ppl very cool.lol
    poor Kaelyn tho:(
    i feel for mr creed too:(
    all hell going to brake lose.lol
    keep up the great work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  3. wind2000

    wind2000 Self Schemata

    Hmmm, imma think going to get some pork liver to eat 2mrw. -lol
     
  4. philostrate

    philostrate Well-Known Member

    hey, nice one...i'm anticipating the updates
     
  5. BabyRain

    BabyRain Doppelgänger of da E.Twin

    ^Guess what... a new reader wandered in ... -lol
     
  6. Loreen66

    Loreen66 Well-Known Member

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    Great update. Seems to bump into it when the story left off on Polly again >.>! So what's really the story behind Kaelyn parents? Hmmm, I tune in on it next time XD.
     
  7. hiake

    hiake Vardøgr of da E.Twin

    Hmmm, and J continues her killing and gutting spree... Wonder how creative can she get with P -devil
     
  8. BabyRain

    BabyRain Doppelgänger of da E.Twin

    LOL yeah, Loreen...
    Sorry, if you can't wait for Polly to get her medicine... -rotfl
     
  9. BabyRain

    BabyRain Doppelgänger of da E.Twin

    Chapter 17 updated...
    Guess Polly is running high on luck -whistle
     
  10. mgfcortez

    mgfcortez Well-Known Member

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    well they'll probly move the body togather Carl and Janie.
    then make polly look like a fool again.lol
    but who knows it could be an all out bloof fest soon:p
    can't wait,keep up the great work baby;)
     
  11. hiake

    hiake Vardøgr of da E.Twin

    Finally a longer chapter... Would Carl have been brainwashed to be Janie's accomplice? Can't wait...

    BR's evil for not posting everything up at once >.<
     
  12. Taxloss

    Taxloss Stripper Vicar

    Ok, wonder what roles Carl and George will play in the coming few chapers. I've a feeling Polly won't die at all...-ohmy Perhaps Polly = Rosalyn's daughter? -whistle
     
  13. BabyRain

    BabyRain Doppelgänger of da E.Twin

    Eh? Me evil now ? Lol ur the one saying making the chapters sweet and short.. and not updating too often.. keep some suspense... :p
     
  14. BabyRain

    BabyRain Doppelgänger of da E.Twin

    Do you think Kaelyn would not notice her mom's missing? -whistle
     
  15. mgfcortez

    mgfcortez Well-Known Member

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    sure but they can say she just left for some reson:p
    but i can't wait to see what you do next;)
    @taxloss
    yeah i'm thinking polly won't dir nether just a feeling i have.lol
    i would had rader her died tho then Kaelyn's mom.lol
    kinda made me feel bad for Kaelyn:(
     
  16. hiake

    hiake Vardøgr of da E.Twin

    Well, she would just assumed that Mr. Creed killed Sam and buried her somewhere = reason he's running late -devil
     
  17. Loreen66

    Loreen66 Well-Known Member

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    Polly's still alive after all this XD. Soon everyone is gonna start disappear one by one, then "Boom", Kaelyn gonna start seeing some bodies lying around just like most horror flicks -whistle -sweat .
     
  18. BabyRain

    BabyRain Doppelgänger of da E.Twin

    Chapter 18 updated...
     
  19. hiake

    hiake Vardøgr of da E.Twin

    Lesbian actions!!!

    So I guess Mr. Creed will come and save the day? Or would it be polly? George???

    Can't wait... And love the dawning of realization on K -devil
     
  20. mgfcortez

    mgfcortez Well-Known Member

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    i knew it.lol
    she into chicks:p
    can't wait till baby puts out the next part:p
    keep up the great work!!