So far great story and interesting characters -clapclap. Why am I not surprised that your the evil one in the story XD. You make me sound like a bitter old maid, I kinda like that -lol
Poor Dann, little minion in the story... Maybe i should convert him to the good side at least he'll be treated nicely. -lol Very interesting plots as you seem to be obedient to Hiake... muahahaha, conversion of Hiake will result in the downfall of the Evil Twins... Wonder what the other ppl roles would be? Keep the story rolling.
Poor Dann...or not? Maybe he's a double spy...maybe he's also working for someone else, if not now then later in the story.
^ Actually I have a feeling he'll do whatever it takes to please his two mistress and that includes getting rid of some of the cast brutally -detect I like the bitter old maid image, it really suites the character picture XD. I wonder what would happen if I was to pic a hot sexy guy for the image instead --cool2
i'm the cat who need a hug badly lol jks jks...again...there are 2 photos.... i never knew moon can be used to describe month lol...my vocab is so limited....oh hi!! brownie bear bear... great intro for BR and Hiake.....i love the way BR introduce the characters...every character has mysteriousness in them...this type of introduction will make the readers ponder about the story afterwards and will start to analyze what kind of people they might be.....BR and hiake seem to be much feared by everyone...maybe i'm a harry potter fan and i seem to connect every character with harry potter's character lol... for eg: BR and Hiake-Lord voldermort dann-peter pettigrew wind-Sirius MDD-Lupin
^Black colored shirt with glasses? -^_^ LOL, Dann = Peter pettigrew? hahaha. -rotfl So who do you wanna be? Hint : You'll be in the next chapter -devil
bingo! wa....yehhh i'm next!!! it's up to you k? Since you are the author lol....you really make me addicted...putting in 2 or 3 names in a chapter lol!! hey tell you what i'm gonna save your story and print it out for my cousin...she loves fantasy genre as well...
^LOL, print it out? It's copyrighted by me <_< Anyway, mine's not really a fantasy story, more like a crazy mixed free- flow PA members' fantasy.
The characters in Ch 1 remind me of one of the scenes in the show by Sam and Michael Hui: [youtube]CgUuYlYVRGU[/youtube]
I pity that Dann pic is macho but he's not treated well. He's a founding member of Linkin Park and Fort Minor for gosh sake. I can't wait to see what my character is.
very cool story the fearful Evil Twins.lol poor dann don't cry:( and a lil lovecraft i like that That is not dead which can eternal lie, And with strange aeons death may die, lovecrath was friends with my fav writer of all time Robert E Howard the maker of conan you got a dragon for a pet ok what is The Elixir of Dexterity? does it make you live forever or what dann minion/ AKA 007.lol keep up the great work baby can't wait for the next one EDIT BTW when you use moons to say how meny days or months they are. its evil, and when you say how many days by days its good. not trying to push the bible on anyone. but in the bible when it saids moons its talking about stuff the devil does,and for anything about God and his ppl they say it in days so i like that how baby put it in her story.lol
awww....poor dann....hmmm..i wonder if dann will get his own back..or remain loyal and obedient..hmmm -detect.... as for the evil twins..very nice touch....it would seem hike having the upper hand....well her ability to get thruogh to babby... but i have a feeling that there are more than what meets the eye.....to each of these charatcers......interesting.... await the next part ^^
i see Brown Bear like a lil red riding hood only with a vampire hunter d side.lol as for the succubus Philo it was kinda disapointing that she ran the ware wolf off so easyly.lol but it was a good chapter can't wate to see more i can't wait to see the the Gathering it sounds cool keep up the great work baby!!!
Muahaha.... BB the little terror...-whistle Philo the succbus? Makes me think of an insect the scarabus -lol Lots of conversion coming... so only MDD and I are the good ones?-batman
