[Fantasy] THE NEMESIS (working title)

Discussion in 'Fan Fix' started by BabyRain, Jul 29, 2007.

  1. BabyRain

    BabyRain Doppelgänger of da E.Twin

    Please take note of the added P/S II; I stress here,

    This is a work of fiction. All of the characters and events portrayed in this story are fictional, with the exception of the references to the PA Members' usernames. Any resemblance to real persons, living or dead, or actual events, is purely coincidental.

    So my apologies to anyone, if their feelings are hurt, please do not take offence to any of the characters portrayed here!

    If you have any dissatisfaction with the portrayal of your character, please PM me, and I will gladly remove the offensive part(s) of it.
     
    #81 BabyRain, Aug 2, 2007
    Last edited: Aug 2, 2007
  2. wind2000

    wind2000 Self Schemata

    Peeps, please be appreciative to BR for her in taking the time to write this superb FICTIONAL story to entertain members of this board. Do note that everything written is not BASED on the real life characters of the "mentioned" usernames, maybe except me ...... jk :p.

    PS Please click "thanks" to author for her time and to show your appreciation of her work!!!!!-flow
     
  3. Loreen66

    Loreen66 Well-Known Member

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    I don't find anything offensive about the character portrayal . It's just a story. The characters are interesting and I enjoy your work honestly. Also the character personality does kinda remind me of me , as I mentioned a few while ago, I liked it -lol
     
  4. BabyRain

    BabyRain Doppelgänger of da E.Twin

    Thanks Wind and Loreen, for ya support ;)
    Chapter 5 updated.
     
  5. Taxloss

    Taxloss Stripper Vicar

    Haha, Cortez only caught a horse to eat? No (spam) trolls? :p
    And the Change for Taxloss... I can recognize some character traits...
    And the baby gargoyles...is that inspired by other kind of pets? -whistle
    Have to admit I secretly wanted a bloody intro for Taxloss. -lol
     
  6. BabyRain

    BabyRain Doppelgänger of da E.Twin

    Maybe I'll let you be caught by him n eaten next -devil
    As if you don't know that already.... -lol
    Your real-life pair of birds... -rotfl
     
  7. wind2000

    wind2000 Self Schemata

    Chapter 5 is hilarious and a great intro to Cortez and Tax characters. Cortez is hungry but couldnt find any food because he wasnt powerful enough. Tax had a sex change and got sent off to earth. -lol

    Gotta love them both :p
     
  8. BabyRain

    BabyRain Doppelgänger of da E.Twin

    ^Haha, your comment is more hilarious... -rotfl
     
  9. BabyRain

    BabyRain Doppelgänger of da E.Twin

    Muahaha, I updated BBear's pic too...
     
  10. philostrate

    philostrate Well-Known Member

    great intro for cortez and tax but rather uneventful entry for loreen and knoc lol...
    now i would like to clarify the characters

    wind the impulsive and arrogant git
    MDD the calm priest
    BR and hiake the fearful evil twins
    dann the timid servant
    bbear the mischievous
    philo the sexy succubus
    loreen the loving tavern owner
    knoc the paranoid
    tax the trans.....lol

    which left only masjavv...


    ps: was I the one who hurt cortez besides knoc?
     
  11. wind2000

    wind2000 Self Schemata

    Tomb Raider + Red Hood? Lol
     
  12. BabyRain

    BabyRain Doppelgänger of da E.Twin

    Aiyo you blur sucker... Yes you were! Isn't it clear from the story? :p
    Lol.

    Here's how B.B. is in her cartoon form...
    I think I did a good job with her human form -tongue2

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  13. wind2000

    wind2000 Self Schemata

    Your PS skills is getting better. -flow
     
  14. philostrate

    philostrate Well-Known Member

    i suck all the time lmao!! i didn't notice until i reread it lol!!!
     
  15. BabyRain

    BabyRain Doppelgänger of da E.Twin

    Chapter 6 updated...
    Comments as usual :p
     
  16. Taxloss

    Taxloss Stripper Vicar

    Wahaha, this is more like it! -devil

    The dwarf and the hobit...-rotfl Brilliant! Hope one of the more twisted characters will get to play with them! (preferably Tax -lol )

    Wormtongue...is that based on someone we know?
     
  17. philostrate

    philostrate Well-Known Member

    a married gollum...That's news to me lol!!! yeah worm tongue could be the brother you see, same personality lol!!

    chapter 6 has a lot of familiar terms and adaptation...18 chambers of torture,dwarfs and hobbits lol
    and I like the fact that BR loves to describe Dann with minion over and over again -rotfl
     
  18. BabyRain

    BabyRain Doppelgänger of da E.Twin

    Did anyone know what Mary the Head Chef was talking about? (the menu) :p
     
  19. wind2000

    wind2000 Self Schemata

    Lol, now we got integration ot LTR in here now. -whistle Is someone going to be Gandalf and tip the balance?
     
  20. mgfcortez

    mgfcortez Well-Known Member

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    i like horse meat;)
    but you see how baby thinks of me i get my ass whiped 2 times in one night.lol
    oh well who care still cool story;)
    tax is the devil who had a sex change.lol
    with her sweet lil pets.lol
    i bet that part came from tax's pic on PA from god the devil and bob.lol

    i wonder if wind and mdd will see thro poor dann:p
    just have to wait and see i think i see the death of dann coming soon tho:p
    sorry dann just a guess.lol

    MG and Napollo.lol
    i can see these scumy lil guys cook alive first.lol
    i can just see someone like baby rip off an arm wile MG is still alive and cook it in front of him and ask him if he wants a bite.lol
    i can't wait until the time comes;)
    very funny shit here.lol
    i know tax and hiake will be hungry too.lol
    it just like thanksgivin two big fat butterballs.lol

    these two chapters are cool as hell;)
    baby you always write the best stuff and keep us running back for more.
    keep up the great work!!!