[Horror] THE CHOSEN ONE

Discussion in 'Fan Fix' started by BabyRain, May 19, 2007.

  1. BabyRain

    BabyRain Doppelgänger of da E.Twin

    Meh, come on be a sport... You know I have taken pains in writing.. It's time for me to sit back and enjoy reading some of your stuff.. you guys -devil
     
  2. hiake

    hiake Vardøgr of da E.Twin

    I'll cheer for mgcrotez ;)
     
  3. BabyRain

    BabyRain Doppelgänger of da E.Twin

    Yeah, I second that.. mgfcortez...

    After all, he's pretty good in predicting my story. I am sure he has enough imagination to write one awesome horror story -devil
     
  4. hiake

    hiake Vardøgr of da E.Twin

    Exactly, go mgcortez go go!!!
     
  5. mgfcortez

    mgfcortez Well-Known Member

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    ok i guess i'll try.lol
    but don't make fun of me when i do:p
    and it'll be at least after babys story.lol
    i'm not going to do it in the next few days.lol
    be cool
     
  6. wind2000

    wind2000 Self Schemata

    BR, very good job. Keep the chapters coming -^_^
     
  7. BabyRain

    BabyRain Doppelgänger of da E.Twin

    Chapter 15 updated... A short chapter, but be warned, stay out if you hate gore.
     
  8. hiake

    hiake Vardøgr of da E.Twin

    OMG... what will K see when she get back home??? And Mr. Creed? Did he go to K's house before Sam did and suffered some horrible death as well?!?!

    Can't wait >.<
     
  9. mgfcortez

    mgfcortez Well-Known Member

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    man i like the new part eating someones insides,you talking bad now.
    am i the only one geting turned on?
    such a sexy story it just turn out to be.lol
    J/K
    but the story is great i like it when stuff like this comes into play;)
    can't wait to see what Janie does next!!
    poor Samantha tho i guess she realy is going to die.lol
    what will Kaelyn do when she get's home to poor girl her mom is dead:(
    oh well:)
    can't wait to see more;)
    keep up the great work baby!!!!
     
  10. Taxloss

    Taxloss Stripper Vicar

    Oh hahahahahaha, a deliciously sick part that chapter 15! Can you be considered as a cannibal if you eat your own flesh? :D
     
  11. BabyRain

    BabyRain Doppelgänger of da E.Twin

    ^Well, I hope you liked it Tax, since that chapter was written with you in mind... You asked for gore..!
    Hope that's enough for you...
     
  12. Taxloss

    Taxloss Stripper Vicar

    Yeah that was pretty neat! But I hope that's not the only gore part? -ohmy
     
  13. BabyRain

    BabyRain Doppelgänger of da E.Twin

    It might be the goriest... I dunno, u decide later-devil
    I'll update my story soon, are u going to bed yet? I don't see you on MSN
     
  14. Taxloss

    Taxloss Stripper Vicar

    Not going to sleep yet, gimme a few minutes and I'll be on MSN.
     
  15. BabyRain

    BabyRain Doppelgänger of da E.Twin

    Chapter 16 updated.
     
  16. Taxloss

    Taxloss Stripper Vicar

    That's more like it! Although I thought it would be easier to spoon the eyes out of the sockets as fingers/claws can penetrate the eyeballs, pop them like a bubble leaving a lot of mess. -evil
     
  17. BabyRain

    BabyRain Doppelgänger of da E.Twin

    Well whatever Janie is, I am sure she has the skills to preserve the eyeballs nicely before she pops them into her mouth -devil
     
  18. Taxloss

    Taxloss Stripper Vicar

    My hands are itching to post a pic up...but I think not everyone can appreciate it...-devil
     
  19. BabyRain

    BabyRain Doppelgänger of da E.Twin

    Go ahead and make their day.. After all they want gore!!!
     
  20. Taxloss

    Taxloss Stripper Vicar

    Weak hearted? Leave now. Gore lover? Scroll down.












































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