[Horror] THE CHOSEN ONE

I didn't even noticed it until you pointed it out XD. Let's see what happens in the next chapter.

 

Chapter 20 updated... -devil

Sorry, a short chapter :(
And sorry, you guys gotta wait a lil' for the next update coz I haven't finish writing it..

 

Great update. Is Polly psychotic by nature though?

 

^ if she's not, she is NOW! haha .. her bf threw pieces of his arm at her ... that was just ... sickly funny!

 

Yes, I was chuckling when I wrote that! -devil

 

this is so disturbing with the red eyes devil. can't help to wonder if BabyRain is going to throw pieces of her arm at me one of these days!

 

Hmmm, zombie humour a la Shaun of the Dead? Nice update on Chapter 20

Keep it coming -^_^

 

LOL! Didn't see that coming! (chapter 20) -^_^

Keep up the good work!

 

Finished reading ch 20. Not a horror story, but definitely a creative and interesting one. Fantastic effort!

 

^Then what genre is this? Comedy? -what?

 

Mystery/horror I guess. Maybe some people are scared of the blood in the story.

 

Make up ur mind.. sir

 

keep up the great work
i love it trowing his arm at her that made my day,to be honest that and eating the heart in the other part.
reminds me of my own twisted way of thinking-rockon
i think i'm in love -blush2
can't wait to see what happens next
keep up the great work!!

 

Fine. Mystery for me. Horror for people who think blood and chopping off body parts is scary.

 

But I thought, "blood and chopping off body parts" = gore... and gore = horror? -rolleyes

 

Horror for sure,it had a lil bit of drama in the begining but i like drama too
its a great story
keep up the great work!

 

Not to me. -^_^

I always chop off body parts. Just not human ones.

 

Mystery? what mystery? Who kaelyn is? Or who Janie is?
I thought Janie = possessed = horror?

Gore = horror? no?

 

Chapter 21 updated... -evil

 

Lol, this is definitely going 18+. The kids might have nightmares.-whistle