well i love it keep up the great work baby! poor guy just get his shit riped off.lol oh well can't wait to see the rest
LOL!!!!! Oh gosh, I really laughed out loud when I read that 'ripping' part! -lol Gory and funny at the same time, good job BRain! -lol-lol-lol
Oh welcome.. hehehe. A new reader! B-lee also likes horror/gore?! -shock A bonus chapter! Hehe yup, guys. I have added a new bonus Chapter 11, as a tribute to George. *someone mentioned that her fav. character wasn't developed enough. Hope you like it, Tax! Enjoy, peeps... -devil
Yeah, that's definately more like it! Now we have some extra background on George's character we can feel more sympathy with this somewhat insecure nerd, especially if you keep in mind what's happening with him. -innocent OK Brain, I'm satisfied with the character development of George, how about Carl? -devil
You guys are greedy <_< Gave you an inch, now you want a foot... OKAY! BONUS CHAPTER!!! CHAPTER 15 A chapter dedicated to Carl and Polly... -^_^ No more requests will be entertained To those of you who are absent, please take note of the two NEW Chapters... CHAPTERS 11 & 15! TWO NEW CHAPTERS!!! -devil
-clapclap Me like the updates. Keep them coming. -^_^ Who would have thought that Polly has such a background to her life? She seems to be the type that can get along with anyone. She must have a SEXY figure for every guy to have only 1 thing in their mind.
Haha, well this just helps you to shape your story to even greater heights huh? Carl in chapter 15: ...would have been even better igf he broke up with his gf he's been dating for 2 years instead of 2 months...to enhance how much he feels for Kaelyn the first moment he saw her. (ya, I try to move Carl in the meany jack ass corner lol)
i'm glad you did this it realy makes us care a lil more about them,like me i wanted polly to die i just didn't like her. she just kinda came across as a big mouth i guess,anybody else felt that way?? but now i see she wasn't that way so i feel bad for her and feel bad for her boyfriend too:( but still think it was funny as hell him cuting his own arm off and trowing it.lol carl i feel sorry for a lil more too now,because it was evil magic that made him cheat not him. but i still think in the back of my mind that a lil too convenient.lol but its just me i guess.lol i love the parrot saying fuck you,crazy but as always bad ass baby keep up the great work!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Oh dear, I have to update on this 'horrible' story... -sweat Anyway, here it is, Chapter 24... -Buttercup -^_^
well i love that i was right about them being sisters,not long before my boy mr creed shows up and puts a axe in that hoes brian at least thats my guess.lol or who knows creed might die too can't wait to see keep up the great work!
Really nice chapter, but how come Kaelyn could have witnessed her dad raping Aunt Rosalyn? And why the hell did they let her witness how a baby was delivered, with the blood and stuff? Must have been quite traumatic for little Kaelyn!
I am not Genevieve, but I'll try to answer on her behalf -blush The 'thing' inside Janie is the one making Kaelyn see the images, therefore, she could see her dad raping her aunt. It's not channelled from her mother's knowledge. So in other words, the 'Devil' told Kaelyn the whole 'missing' story...
You are one cruel person -ohmy. The poor guy lost something really precious to him XD. Anyway what Mr. Creed did gives me the chills and great update.
