[Horror] THE CHOSEN ONE

Discussion in 'Fan Fix' started by BabyRain, May 19, 2007.

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  1. wind2000

    wind2000 Self Schemata

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    hehehe, you might be wrong on that. im nice on the net, but i might be the devil in real life. :D

    speaking of which, not this time, maybe next time i go to HK, ill swing by to MA and visit you.
    good?
     
    #41 wind2000, May 20, 2007
  2. BabyRain

    BabyRain Doppelgänger of da E.Twin

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    Sounds good ;) When do u plan to make the trip?
     
    #42 BabyRain, May 20, 2007
  3. brown_bear

    brown_bear ☆‧° ☆﹒﹒‧ ☆ ﹒﹒‧☆‧° ☆

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    wow just finished and gotta say pretty good -worship was a little lost in places so had to re-read some of it but that could be becuase my eyes are little @@ at the moment too much reading lately >.< cant wait for next part :)
     
    #43 brown_bear, May 20, 2007
  4. BabyRain

    BabyRain Doppelgänger of da E.Twin

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    ^Thankies BBear -lol

    Will post it up tonight since you are waiting for it! Lol...
     
    #44 BabyRain, May 20, 2007
  5. brown_bear

    brown_bear ☆‧° ☆﹒﹒‧ ☆ ﹒﹒‧☆‧° ☆

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    ^ haha best get your writing cap on then -lol ya got a lot of fans here now :p
     
    #45 brown_bear, May 20, 2007
  6. wind2000

    wind2000 Self Schemata

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    Next one, dont know yet. -^_^
     
    #46 wind2000, May 20, 2007
  7. hiake

    hiake Vardøgr of da E.Twin

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    Nice fiction you are starting here, but where's the next part >.< Can't wait to read it!!!
     
    #47 hiake, May 21, 2007
  8. BabyRain

    BabyRain Doppelgänger of da E.Twin

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    Chapter 2 updated.......................... -devil
     
    #48 BabyRain, May 25, 2007
  9. ab289

    ab289 Well-Known Member

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    hhmm ... is chp 2 a rushed job? i like chp 1 better. to me, it's better written. and it ended with a ... urge that u can't wait for chp 2. But chp 2 ... not really ... or maybe it's becoz i'm sleepy today?
     
    #49 ab289, May 25, 2007
  10. BabyRain

    BabyRain Doppelgänger of da E.Twin

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    Lol, do you mean that it didn't end on a suspense note?
     
    #50 BabyRain, May 25, 2007
  11. Taxloss

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    Chapter 2 could have been a bit more elaborated? And if you take it out of context it reads like a girly roman? *hides away*
     
    #51 Taxloss, May 25, 2007
  12. BabyRain

    BabyRain Doppelgänger of da E.Twin

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    Lol, ok ok. I promise Chapter 3 will be more suspenseful... And will update it by tomorrow ok? :p
     
    #52 BabyRain, May 25, 2007
  13. Taxloss

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    No really, take your time BRain! It's about quality, not quantity. :)
     
    #53 Taxloss, May 25, 2007
  14. BabyRain

    BabyRain Doppelgänger of da E.Twin

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    It's already written... Lol, these are written ages ago. Just that up to a certain part; then I'd have to continue it. >.<

    Btw, i posted de recipes u asked for :p
     
    #54 BabyRain, May 25, 2007
  15. ab289

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    yup. about quality and not quantity. i think the few that have just read agreed chp 1 is better?
     
    #55 ab289, May 25, 2007
  16. wind2000

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    Dad wouldnt happen to be one of those alcoholic or womanizer, would he?
     
    #56 wind2000, May 25, 2007
  17. BabyRain

    BabyRain Doppelgänger of da E.Twin

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    Aww, why? Is it because it really sucked or because it did not have a suspenseful/gory/horror feel to it?
    Sorry, no spoilers..
     
    #57 BabyRain, May 25, 2007
  18. wind2000

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    Not even for little old me? -doh
     
    #58 wind2000, May 25, 2007
  19. ab289

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    maybe becoz of the high expectations after chp1. and all of a sudden kinda .........
     
    #59 ab289, May 25, 2007
  20. Taxloss

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    ...kinda like something from a girly roman. A fragment from the Harlequin series...-unsure
     
    #60 Taxloss, May 25, 2007
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