-er is chapter one different to chapter 2......it seems so different geh....or maybe im forgotten....eh i danno
^ awww not really suck.....i think mebe i lost the plot in what happened......blehhh i re-read chap 1......its coz you left it so long so i just read chap 2 and was like -huh mm gai duk what happened ja ma.....-hug so kinda felt like it was a separate story.....
now, now, don't have to cry. i think bbear is being really nice. But i do feel the disconnection too; hence my statement of "or maybe it's becoz i'm sleepy today".
The title of this story just reminded me of this girl that was killed by this cult group because they said she was "the chosen one" -_-'' really lame excuse to kill someone but this is a really good story, good job BabyRain
lots of movie with that "the chosen one" theme though. isn't there a devil movie that tries to kill this kid coz that kid is the chosen one? if i'm not mistaken starred arnold swarzenegger!
woot yeh so not just me...... baby --> yeh post it up like 2-3 days between each other....try not to leave it for too long k
Getting better but it reminds of a movie of stephen king (cant remember the exact name) where the dog became evil.
-er i dont wanna sound stupid or anything....but are these all different stories then....suddenly a dog story??
Oh yeah with regards to the dog, I wrote this story when I knew this guy from Internet he used the sn -Fidodog... so this character is kinda dedicated to him lor... kekekeke.
Wait till you see the character development of Fido? lol... Neway, he's just a friend I knew when I was writing it; so I thought I might add some fun by including his dog. Hmm, you guys haven't really commented on Chapter 3 itself...
I thought i did, but ill repeat it since u didnt bother reading earlier >.< . Its better than chapter 2 in because there's a intriguing plot developing. Keep up the good work.
