just had a chance to catch up on this story ... it's getting gross ... brain coming out of the skull?
Let me remind you... that the genre is Horror AND Gore... So, step out now ab289, stop reading before it's too late.
well i'm sure something crawed out of the dog's brain.lol can't wait to see what happen's next. i'm thinking polly will come back at Janie and get done in by some black magic. and use her blood to call forth the dark power.lol but she'll need more soul's to get her full power. the love she has for Kaelyn is her only weakness
Nice, as it makes me wonder what Janie is up to know. (ofcourse I do have some ideas, it's unavoidable if you've read quite a lot of horror books, but try to surprise us I would say)
You sure about that? 'Cuz I'm afraid I will sum up some of your possible scenarios leaving you without much choice?
Well, I reckon it's nowadays very hard to come up with an original idea no one else have ever written, unless you want to be the David Lynch under the writers population.
Janie is possessed by a demon on the evening she was left alone at the house for a short moment and is now trying to destruct everything and everyone close to her, incl. seducing Carl. Maybe she'll get him in her power -by feeding herself with Carl's soul or blood like a succubi- and tear him apart from Kaelyn. Janie also tries to get rid of Polly and Janie probably will succeed to kill George or at least give him the same 'treatment' as Carl. Kaelyn feels desperate and lonely on this but she won't give up and decides to fight back, maybe she'll get help from an unexpected corner like her Dad or a new character shows up. -sweat
Wait; there's a loophole there... Janie isn't possessed on that particular evening bcoz it says that she's been known to haf these 'weird powers' for some time now... The rest of it... partly accurate... lol. You and cortez are doing a good job... Can take over from me...
Huhuh, shall I put my last reply behind a hidden block so it won't spoil the story for those who have no clues yet? And err...Janie might not be possessed on that night but something had triggered the evil things in her on that night?
