(Poem) The Spider and the Troll

Discussion in 'Fan Fix' started by hadouken, Mar 30, 2006.

  1. The spider and the troll

    Once upon a time In a mountain so high there lived a big brown troll with a big brown sack
    Now you must know this troll was not nice.

    He put things he didn't like into his big brown sack.

    One day a spider ran by, the troll screamed for dear life "eek a spider a spider!" and snatched it into his big brown sack.

    The poor little spider awoken, dazed and confused, to find three other spiders chewing their way out.

    He felt quite relieved as he found an easy way out "Squish Splat Squish" Stomp Stomp Stomp!

    The poor little spider ran for dear life. :ohnoes:

    Over the table on to the chair Stomp! Whack! Stomp!

    Across the floor and onto the wall into his hole just above the door.

    The little spider is safe once and for all.
     
  2. pacho

    pacho Active Member

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    hahahahaha
    i think the humor would come across more if you fixed up the spelling/grammar
    :) but good work!
     
  3. Aznguy123

    Aznguy123 Well-Known Member

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    i dont get it
     
  4. krazyaznboi

    krazyaznboi Well-Known Member

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    hehe....poor spider

    Good job
     
  5. kdotc

    kdotc 안녕하세요빅뱅K-Dragon입니다

    old threads comin bak to life
     
  6. gentle_br3eze

    gentle_br3eze Well-Known Member

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    hahaha. good one. pretty funny. kind of remind me of the billy goats though. hehe.