^ then you are no more walking...jump around will you? lol! getting more members to join is a great idea...we seemed to have forgotten about the gathering...it always reminds me of the kung fu movies 'mou lam dai wui' where they gather all martial arts masters and elect a leader among the clans...
i'm interested in the story! even if i don't show up til the last chapter.. or don't show up at all. lol. but i was merely throwing out there.. "hmm. i wonder who i am." you storyline's original. that's what i like about it. as far as my memory goes, i can't recall anything that your story is like except (of course) the missile-shooting BB who resembles someone else i know.. haha.
Haha not really, more like inspired from other movies and stories here and there... like Mr. Vampire.. kekeke. oh, BB's character and Philo's are both from Darkstalkers... well, at least BB's.... Philo's cousin (Morrigan + Lilith) are from Darkstalkers hehe. Unless you are not talking about that, then who do u mean? B.B. owning Lilith -evil Morrigan (Philo's cousin)
Nice updates with Chapters 8 and 9! -^_^ lol @ BB's sudden action on the elf! And how ironic now that the western priest Wind is bitten by a vampire girl who in turn was bitten by a Eastern vampire and will become an Eastern vampire himself if MDD's cure doesn't work for him.
I really had to Laugh Out Loud when I read the sentences: “But… but… Master MDD has given us protection…” Kuro said weakly. “What? You mean that object you stuck in the front?” Taxloss chuckled, “Well. I can’t read Chinese.” I can't read it, therefore it can't harm me! -rotfl -rotfl! But I think this Taxloss was in one of his/her finer moods otherwise he/she would have tortured this Kuro more in order to get his signature. And poor Dann being mislead by the Evil Twin with that "Potion of Desire"
hmm.. i have to admit i have no idea what Darkstalkers are.. and what i was thinking of was Roald Dahl's version of "Little Red Riding Hood" hehe. you should read it. just google "Roald Dahl's revolting rhymes" and it should be the third or fourth link down i think. as for chpt.10: "Well. I can't read Chinese." Ignorance is bliss for the evil, eh? haha. and it teaches you to make promises you can keep.. *shudder* lol. nice story.
The "signing contract with the devil" part was a bit too short but it was pretty creative. Taxloss being a clever devil is quite funny.
Since no one seems to notice, hehe I shall mention it here... The reference to LOTR (Lord of the Rings) the Dark Lord Sauron's nine Dark Riders or Ringwraiths... now working under Taxloss (Dark Helpers). We got no LOTR fans in the house?
very cool chapter again i really enjoyed the taxloss part but like mdd said it could had been longer and more blooder but loved the part where she said i'm more than evil.lol and then said that thing on the door i can't read chinese very funny funny as hell.lol and i love how you had the ring wraths from lotr help him sign over his soul and poor dann:( geting used i just know it won't work the way he hopes.lol it'd be very funny if dann poored it in babyrains cup-devil then baby be pissed after hiake fixs it after dann has his way with her poor dann would get killed for sure-rotfl but it might be wrost if it was posoin-dead and maybe the warewolf has a chance if knoc loses his sister-devil-bigclap-clapclap-drool-evil-bigsmile well maybe just hoping anyway.lol but love your story as always baby-drool keep up the great work!!! yeah i Laugh my ass off at the part where you can't read chinese funny as hell.lol yeah i was thinking you have a little more fun too the evil twins are truely evil to misslead poor dann there own helper.lol but i like them even more because of that now.lol evil is as evil does-lol i seen it but didn't read it before you posted this post.lol i would had said something if i would had seen it erlyer again love the new chapter
if dann happened to find out that the 'potion of desire' isn't giving the desired result would he turn against the evil twins? lol
hahahaha! i like my character thanks BR. i just can't believe Ctodk is my brother -noclue not that there's anything wrong with that..-whistle hehe. if only i was a good athlete in real life that would be cool as for the story, i can't wait to see if loreen dies or not.. ahh! the suspense. lol. and is CNB/Ctodk good or bad or neutral or long-lost relatives or what? heh. i overanalyze.
^Heheh, I wanted to introduce your character later, but since you are anxious.. I figure i'll write a little bit on u first... But I made it vague so no one can tell you are on the good/bad side. And ya know you ain't a bloodsucking vampire for now at least... lol. -lol so you can't wait to see if loreen dies or not.. How about Wind? No one cares if he's going to turn? Lol
^"for now at least" hahahaha. i feel reassured. aww, thanks. i would have been willing to wait.. nahh, don't really care bout him. for the time being. (jk wind. of course i care bout ya!) i like being "in the moment". so. my biggest concern: will loreen die? (and consequently 1. knoc goes on a man-demon hunt for dann 2. knoc gets killed instead of his sister 3. they both get killed 4. someone's going to die; i just know it.. somehow. haha. totally guessing. 4. knoc will get a second gun. just a random thought.) i don't know how you organize all those different storyline "maybes" and "shoulds" or "would?s" in your head. don't overwork your brain.
cool chapter i like it when dann gets pissed i wonder if dann will mess up the evil twins plan by killing the guy just because he likes the same girl.lol oh well just kick back and wait keep up the great work baby!
Great updates on all those chapters. Love how Taxloss sign the contract with Kuro dismembered arm -sweat So someone's going to die eh XD. B.B seems to be having fun blowing poor creatures up -ohmy Or wind gets turned into one of those evil thing, take a chunk off of lorree, then MDD/Knoc have no choice but to kill both of them XD. Soo many possibilities, so I guess we have to wait till the next update hehe
