The Nemesis (The 2nd Coming) (working title)

Discussion in 'Fan Fix' started by BabyRain, Aug 18, 2007.

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  1. hiake

    hiake Vardøgr of da E.Twin

    And some deaths perhaps? *AM HOPEFUL*
     
  2. BabyRain

    BabyRain Doppelgänger of da E.Twin

    Which character do you wanna eliminate my dear? -evil
     
  3. lol am i too much of a puss to ask out a girl? hahahaha

    no girls are out of my league >=) hahahaha
     
  4. chickenutbread

    chickenutbread Well-Known Member

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    ^with a creepy face.. oops, er, mask.. like that, i'm sure no girls would turn you down :p
     
  5. hiake

    hiake Vardøgr of da E.Twin

    Anyone, I look forward to the manner of demise under your creative craftmanship... -pirate

    It isn't the who, but the how, which intrigues me.
     
  6. Taxloss

    Taxloss Stripper Vicar

    ^ Same here! -devil

    @ BRain: If you need some inspiration or advice for some original killings you can always ask me. ;)
     
  7. BabyRain

    BabyRain Doppelgänger of da E.Twin

    Chapter 19 updated. -^_^
    Comments plz.
     
  8. chickenutbread

    chickenutbread Well-Known Member

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    -shock NOO LOREEN, don't go with him! lol. nahh, i don't know what's going to happen. stay away from dann though!

    it seems she has a somewhat shy side to her after all eh?
     
  9. ^ lol

    stay away from smeck-the-impostor-under-my-name dann lol
     
  10. philostrate

    philostrate Well-Known Member

    hey I missed BBrain's stories after disappearing in weeks lol!!! finally had time to update myself on the nemesis

    I love chapter 15-16, seriously.. it has all the suspense and emotion..but the killings are quite predictable as can be seen in most of the classic vampire movies..I was actually amused by the part where they tried to hold their breath; reminds me of a vampire movie where a spectacled guy (if i'm not mistake) tried to hold his breath but ended up farted loudly lmao!!!

    Can't believe Wind turned...That QT chubby guy lol---into a vampire---lmao!!! bbrain it's time to change Wind's pic and make it similar to Ani king's F**ked up face lol!!!


    And chapter 19 also, this part is also funny

    No! Er… of course I ain’t joking… I am very… sincere…”
    Loreen laughed, “Well… I wouldn’t mind… Since ye so sincere…”


    Loreen sounded so sarcastic.

    I believe Wind's gonna come back and MDD will still come back and forced to finish off his partner.
     
  11. hiake

    hiake Vardøgr of da E.Twin

    On the other hand, I think Loreen is much more resourceful than BabyRain lets us know so far... And I wonder if the next blood we are going to taste will be of Dann's... -rolleyes
     
  12. chickenutbread

    chickenutbread Well-Known Member

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    ^haha. yeah, then it'll be a win-win situation. lose-lose situation for dann but win for everyone else :p

    just kiddin imposter-dann ;)
     
  13. Taxloss

    Taxloss Stripper Vicar

    Oi, it's Loreen! Loreen is the killer lol! She sees in Dann the next victim and it's the so called 'baddies' in this story that want to unmask her! :D ;)
     
  14. in her wildest dreams lol


    i should write a "The Nemesis: The Reign of King Dann a side story"

    and in that story, if loreen wants to rape me, im gonna get all my zombie musketeers after her lol
     
  15. BabyRain

    BabyRain Doppelgänger of da E.Twin

    reign of king dann??? LOL more like the demise of poor dann
     
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