Two poems i wrote.

Discussion in 'Fan Fix' started by misz_m, Jul 22, 2008.

  1. misz_m

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    Cinderella

    Naïve, I thought our love was true
    Deceived, I thought we were something meant to be
    Ignorant, I thought he had understood and accepted me
    But it seems to be all just a dream
    Painful heartache as I realized I was living in a fantasy
    Lies of affection, I was handed the dress and slippers
    Foolish, I deemed them mine forever

    I believed when the clock struck twelve
    I believed I’d remain gracefully posed in the centre of the ballroom
    I believed my prince would take my hand in adoration
    I believed it wasn’t just my heart talking
    I believed it wasn’t my mind’s illusion

    I suppose I was delusional to the figments of perfection in my mind

    My flawless gown turned back to rags
    My elegant hair had fallen back down to my shoulders
    My jewelry of enchantment had disappeared

    I clutched my clothing in embarrassment
    Cringed at the looks placed upon me around the room
    The prince looked away with disgust in his eyes
    And started to walk away.
    My eyes starting dripping with water
    As I ran out into the pouring rain
    Nobody saw my tears for the water had washed them away
    Nobody heard my cries for the thunder hushed them quiet

    My eyes fell upon the crystal clear slippers
    Sparkling with a diamond shine still
    But I knew the truth
    Even if they didn’t disappear
    Didn’t mean they were mine
    It’s time I took them off myself
    And end this Cinderella dream.

    Cinderella 2


    Boo!
    With a word, she jumps
    Your arms wrapped around her tiny waist
    While her head slowly lies back onto your strong shoulder
    A giggle and a smile of pure happiness
    Ten fingers interlocked
    Hearts intertwined
    Step step step down the stairs
    Away from this place
    Into your own little world

    I wonder and I ponder
    Scratch my head
    “What’s happening?”
    No, I understand, no really I do.
    But why’s the sting still stinging
    And the sword still stabbing
    “Abracadabra. Disappear”
    Eyebrows bunched together
    I lean there, watching you fade away
    “Please” I say
    But miracles don’t come true
    And dreams are meant to be awoken from

    Should I ask? Do I even have a chance?
    Could I ever be her?
    No, I know.
    She is in your eyes
    I’m not even at the back of your mind.
    How? How to stop me?
    Somebody, teach me.
    Because I don’t know how
    I’m falling too deep
    And I can’t get out.
    It’s not that easy I guess.
    Tell me now
    “Let go”
    And I will because I can’t handle it anymore
    Maybe one day he will notice
    He will see
    Poor little girl, your guardian angel
    Watching over you, never to be seen
    Wishing you happiness, while hiding in pain
    Maybe one day he will catch my presence
    Walk towards me and say
    Those three words
    No.
    I was told Cinderella doesn’t exist.
    I’ll cry for you this one last time.
    Goodbye.

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    Thanks ^.^
     
    #1 misz_m, Jul 22, 2008
    Last edited: Oct 5, 2009
  2. Phoenix

    Phoenix *~Though she be but little, she is fierce~*

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    these are nice poems..
    really good at capturing the emotions set by the scenes..
    good job (Y)



    *this prob belongs in the FanFIc section*
     
  3. azn822

    azn822 Well-Known Member

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    very nicesh. It is illustrative.
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    #3 azn822, Jul 22, 2008
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  4. those are very nice poems... good job! =D
     
  5. ProjectD

    ProjectD VIP yay :]

    pretty nice read... great job
     
  6. emawlee28

    emawlee28 Well-Known Member

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    i lovee the 1st wun (=
     
  7. misz_m

    misz_m Member

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    thanks you guys! =D
     
  8. sars4tw

    sars4tw Well-Known Member

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    Amazing poems. I like them.
     
  9. S.N.Gaara

    S.N.Gaara Well-Known Member

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    Big fan of your first one :p
     
  10. h0lyAur0ra

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    =O!! wow.. .its really good!! . . .im jealous >.<!
     
  11. hob0

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    aweesome poems : )
     
  12. armedretards

    armedretards Well-Known Member

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    I am a big fan of poetry, i personally dont write them, but i read a whole lot of them on poetry.com. These are genious
     
  13. sams12345

    sams12345 Well-Known Member

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    i like the first one the best!
     
  14. -steffi-

    -steffi- Well-Known Member

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    ohhh wow -bigclap-bigclap
    wish i could write like that !!
    x
     
  15. mide

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    oh man. that is so touching >_<
     
  16. mide

    mide Member

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    bump please XD
     
  17. Ranana_skag

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    Two poems i wrote

    I think it is obvious who this is directed to.. but i can sense the appreciation in the two poems and it is definitely not cheesy good job
     
  18. hyang

    hyang Active Member

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    wow your poems are very nice .
     
  19. coolkid0123

    coolkid0123 Member

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    nice one~~
     
  20. lianglien

    lianglien Member

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    awwwwwww so touching...very lovable poems ;)